hey natasha your contents page looks really good. I really like the use of different colours you sued and the fonts especially as different colours attracts people. It's not complicated so its easy to understand. the layout looks quite good and well structured. You used images of your images. Reading your contents page won't make a person feel not to read as there's less reading. Overall you used all the codes and conventions of a contents page and it looks really good . However since it's a college magazine if your magazine is based on female or male or both then you could have added bit more images to make vivid and interesting to look it and you could have added more into their texts about like for example the quizzes what quizz is it something exciting. But if it's aimed at female audience then its okay but if its for both genders then you could have been bit creative more. :)
Hi! your contents page looks well organized and the layout structure of your texts and images blends together well, too! All I have to say is that your font styles and sizes should be a bit more appropriate to the target audiences because it's over sized and the font style chosen is quite difficult to read on. Choose an appealing yet clear font styles and sizes in order for the readers to be able to understand the overall layout more clearly! Apart from that, a good try!
Your content page is really simple and plain this isn't necessarily a bad thing as many students prefer to read less and many focus on colours. The colours are attractive and stand out against the background the only thing I would say is sometimes the font is difficult to read and I personally would use more of a simple text for easiness and sometimes plain is better :) Overall good content page!
hey natasha your contents page looks really good. I really like the use of different colours you sued and the fonts especially as different colours attracts people. It's not complicated so its easy to understand. the layout looks quite good and well structured. You used images of your images. Reading your contents page won't make a person feel not to read as there's less reading. Overall you used all the codes and conventions of a contents page and it looks really good . However since it's a college magazine if your magazine is based on female or male or both then you could have added bit more images to make vivid and interesting to look it and you could have added more into their texts about like for example the quizzes what quizz is it something exciting. But if it's aimed at female audience then its okay but if its for both genders then you could have been bit creative more. :)
ReplyDeleteHi! your contents page looks well organized and the layout structure of your texts and images blends together well, too! All I have to say is that your font styles and sizes should be a bit more appropriate to the target audiences because it's over sized and the font style chosen is quite difficult to read on. Choose an appealing yet clear font styles and sizes in order for the readers to be able to understand the overall layout more clearly! Apart from that, a good try!
ReplyDeleteYour content page is really simple and plain this isn't necessarily a bad thing as many students prefer to read less and many focus on colours. The colours are attractive and stand out against the background the only thing I would say is sometimes the font is difficult to read and I personally would use more of a simple text for easiness and sometimes plain is better :) Overall good content page!
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